Thứ Tư, 23 tháng 3, 2011

LONG ESSAY

       Do you agree with me that money always has its power in our life? Money plays an important play in our life. Without money, we can't live a happy life. Therefore, when money looses its cost-it means that the inflation happens, our life will be affected a lot. One of the classes in our society affected the most is students who live far away their family. In the context of the high inflation, students face a lot of difficulties. The high inflation puts them under the pressure of money and the studying of students is also affected a lot. Now, students are finding the best solutions to overcome these difficulties.
         Students living far from their house hardly earn money for daily life. Most of them still depend on their parents. Every month, they receive an amount of money from their parents. With that money, they must spend for everything from daily expense, renting an apartment to the expense for studying.Maybe students'life is difficult. However, life is more and more difficult for students because of the impact of high inflation. In the context of high inflation, the problem that most students worry about is that the price of the consumer goods goes up and up while the monthly money their parents support them doesn't rise. Students are becoming worried a lot about money when the price of food goes up twice as much as before. For example, before the high inflation, students just spend about 30 thousands dong for meals everyday. However, with 50 thousands dong everyday for buying food, students can have meals with vegetables and meat now. Comparing with a few years ago. with amount of money of 1 million dong every month , student can live comfortably but it is veru difficult for them to live with such amount of money at present. Consequently, they try to reduce money for daily meals, even they don't have breakfast. Therefore. it affects a lot to their heath. Not only the price of the consumer goods rises, money paid for renting an a partment also rises dramatically. Besides, water bills, electricity bills are higher than before. Everything is going up, which makes students anxious alot about money. Money is becoming a real anxiety to students in the context of high inflation.
               Not only the pressure of money, the high inflation also affects on studying of students. Before the inflation, they don't have to worry about money, they just concentrate on studying in university. Now the price goes up higher and higher. As a result, most students have to take part- time jobs to earn money for daily expenses. Eveyday, after university students have to do a lot of jobs to support their life. Some students work as a delivery person. Everydaym they work outside, delivering advertising papers for companies to earn money. The other students choose the jobs as waiters in the restaurants. They have to work for about 5 hours from 5 p.m to 11 p.m in the evening. It is not easy to earn money. Sometimes they fell tired and when they come back home, they just want to sleep. As a result, the pressure of high inflation makes students distract their studying. After tiring hours, they can not concentrate on lessons at university. Some students focusing on earning money drop school because their result of studying is too bad. The pressure of money in the context of inflation makes them neglect their principle responsibility. Because of the impact of high inflation, students are losing their future for a good job.
              Now to live in the context of high inflation, students need to have solutions for themselves to overcome the difficulties. The first solution that students should learn is making a budget . In the context of high inflation, making a budget is really important . Students should cut money for unneccessary things and spend money approciately . For example , some students like going out for coffee with friends for about 3 times a week. However, they should go out just  for 1 time a week now. Therefore, they can save a little money . The other solution is that students should make a detailed plan to balance between studying and taking part- time job . Studying is the main responsibility of students so they should make the priority for it . Arranging the timetable carefully helps students take part- time without being affected to their studying . Therefore ,they can both earn money and study well at university . Besides , the government should give the policy to support students in the context of high inflation.
                 Although students' life in the context of high price is really difficult , they will overcome  the difficulties if they know how to plan for their life.
                  

Thứ Ba, 15 tháng 3, 2011

MAKING AN OUTLINE: Student's life in the context of high inflation

Introduction: In the context of high inflation, the price of all goods is increasing drastically. This affects    directly on students' life who live far away their house. Because of  the inflation , students are under a lot of pressure : They both worry about money and studying in university. Also, they are in difficulty looking for a job in the future.I wonder how they can face that problems?
BODY:
     Paragraph 1: Students' life is becoming more difficult because the pressure of increasing of the price.
              - In the context of high inflation, the price of goods go up and up while money for daily life does not 
 rises . Therefore, they have to manage to spend enough with that amount of money. They have to reduce money for daily meals. As a result, it affects to their health.
             -Not only prices of goods and foods go up, money paid for renting the apartment also rises dramatically. For example, water bills and electricity bills are higher and higher.
   Paragraph 2: The high inflation of the economy also affects to studying of students.
             -With the pressure of high price of the expense for daily life, students are facing to increasing the tuition fee. Consequently. they are have to take a part-time job to earn money so they do not concentrate on studying in university. And their result of studying is not good.
            - They are losing the chance of good job in the future
paragraph 3: Solutions for students to overcome the context of high inflation.
            - learn how to spend money approciately.
            - plan for studuing carefully and arrange the timetable to take a part-time job.
           - the government and universities should give the policies to support students 
CONCLUSION:  In the context of inflation, students should make a suitable plan of spending to stay healthy and study well.
                                                   WRITING INTRODUCTION
C1: BROAD STATEMENT:
       Student who live far awy their house always face a lot of difficulties in daily life. They have taken many jobs to earn money paying for their studying. Even to study in university, some students have to work all nights in the restaurants, fast- food stores. However, these are not all difficulties which students have. Nowadays, high inflation is becoming the worry of most students because it affects not only spending money but also  their studying.
C2:QUESTION+ RELEVANCE
        Do you agree with me that money always has its power in our life? Money plays an important role in our life.Without money, we can not live a happy life . Therefore, when money reduces its cost, it means that the inflation happens, the residents' life will be affected a lot. And perhaps students who live far away their family face to much more difficulties in the context of high inflation. The high inflation puts them under the pressure of money and studying in unversity.